is des ki ab main kia baat karu?

If it were in Hindi, it would have been more explicit..

I have written it according to my 18 crores ,you can write about your 100 crores :)

^^^^ that is a rude reply

sorry for the rudeness , i did not mean it.I meant the misery of my 18 crores.Although my words are for all the masses but i have written it specifically for my 18 crores.

What 18crores!? I only meant its difficult to read it in English as some of pronunciations come out in a wrong way. Urdu is a beautiful lang if you read it properly. If it wasnt meant for us - or specially me - to read you would have specified it!
I wouldnt dream about your specific audience right... I like reading Urdu stuff.. So I read it ...simple..

^^^^that is a cool reply

Haha thanks ! ;)

@ Thinking cap i agreee , Its hard to understand ! English - urdu :/

what the hell is this 18 crore and 100 crore?? @ Author ?

Sorry for the inconvenience my friends..
Is there any option to write in urdu here?

@thinkingcap ,i wrote it about my people but its for all.not for any specific audience frankly.Sorry

No you still didnt get it... When I write 'gulshan ki faqat' the pronounciation may vary from person to person because English language gives us that liberty... But when I write ' गुलशन की फ़क़त ' , this can be pronounced in just one way . That's what I meant when I said 'the use of Hindi would have made it explicit'
I have nothing against your writing... I polled it nice! Maybe I wasn't clear..

plz don't bring the new issue - "18crore - 100crore"
or you should have brought it before . i could have mentioned it in my poem :P
well joke's apart

see what all we want to say is that we aren't able to appreciate the beauty of your write up because of lack of understanding. now suppose if someone writes in Spanish, french, Hebrew etc languages , will people be able to understand and adore its style or meaning ?? obviously not :)

now it is totally up to you "what you write" no one questioned your intention or topic. they just said they aren't able to understand :) right ?

and also my friend it is not about the 18crore people you are writing for ... it is about the people reading your post. and they belong to 118 crores not just 18.

proof - if we were from the 18 crores we wouldn't have objected but we are from 118 crores and you too belong to 118 crores only. don't treat yourself different. if you are writing only for "your 18 crores" you are not doing justice with your pen , paper and reader :)

may be the author refers to the 18 crore urdu speaking population and 100 crore hindi speaking population. -__________- ( poker face ) {face-palm}

And honestly I didn't get the 18 crores and 100 crores funda man.. Not that I want to know! Just saying... And yea Caressa is right...I always thought we are your people! As in we are all together ... The 118 cr or whatever.. Chill man... And Caressa! Nice comment I edited mine when I read yours :)

seriously - "is des ki mai kya baat kru ?" where people count their readers and write for only them ....
you should edit the post and mention this point in your poem :/

@thinking cap - don't even try to understand that funda !
but you liar ! when did srijan sir provide that edit-the-comment option ?? lol :D

thanks btw :D

No no I mean I deleted and wrote again... But there should be an option to edit na.. It will be fun! Specially in debates! " ooooh I never said that" buhahaha

hahahhaha .... srijan is super-fabulous .... he knew babus will debate and tamper their comments to rescue :D
anyways if he still provides this option then babus will take screenshots of what came from the opposition part :D and post it in their write ups ! " see you said it ... i have the proof" :D lol

OMG, its really a problem.I know urdu,am from pakistan and seriously i wrote about pakistanis.I can write in urdu but that again will be a problem.As many of you will not understand it.

Wow.. *sighs* We Dont want to read Urdu cause we can't but you know what .. Forget it... Next time just write (18) besides the title of your story or poem or whatever... And I won't read it! I swear!

Let's stop this ...

Dont take it in the wrong way friend ,i am new to this network
..,You may help me to understand the features of this network. it will be a favor ..

There is no option for writing in Urdu here.. Not in my knowledge... Read mine and Caressa's third comment .. U will understand what we mean .. The poem is in Urdu maybe so writing it in Hindi would do more justice as the readers would understand it better. Many writers do that here... Hope u understand what I mean this time and not take me wrong again ...

as the site says "writer"-"babu"....you can write in "english" - "hindi"
had it read - "adeeb musanif" ... it would have given an idea that you can write in urdu

( sorry if "adeeb musanif" is not the correct word .... sue google they told me it is correct :P )

[ an attempt to make you understand in this way ]

Thank you very much sir :)
I tried to explain it in the message.I dont know to write urdu but i will try in roman urdu and english together !

thank you :)

author is so patient and a good listener.
10 points to author

hahahah caressa odette, because love and patience are the virtues that a writer must have :)

and a writer writes to all .... remember this virtue too :)

This is getting funny ... 'Write in Hindi'! I understood your post!! I know that much Urdu!!

Your 18 cr people will also read it with ease if you change your "writing" language.. Dont write 'mazhab'... Instead write 'मज़हब' ... My sleep is gone man ! Lol

yeah i wrote it for all but as we choose some topic for writing.18 crore population of pakistan was my theme.

i dont know how to write hindi.I apologize for it sir

Ah! Finally! No worries if you can't write Hindi.. At least now you know what I meant! Phew! BTW u seem to be a down to earth person.. and u write well too... Thanks for the translation ... Though I knew what it meant ;) now I can sleep well! Lol keep writing!

hahaha.Stay blessed :)

And please dont apologise so much.. I will start feeling guilty! :|

Okay ,its ok friend !